Cloud

 How are you cloud?

Are you alright?

You are talking very loud

With all your might!


Yes, I’m fine,

I’m talking through rain

I am in a cloud line

To go to the plain.

- Myra


This is Myra’s first poem written on Sunday 25th October 2026 at home. She is in P2 going to P3

The first stanza is a concerned narrator asking the cloud if he’s alright because she’s talking very loud.

We learn in the second stanza that it’s because she’s talking through rain and the loud sounds are dampening her voice due to which she needs to shout louder.

And the best thing is the visual of clouds waiting in queue as though planes taking off to wander over to the plains.

A wonderful, sweet, visual poem written in just 15 min. 

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